这只是我的一篇英语作文，如果有大佬给些建议什么的，非常感谢，特别是词汇谢谢(3)

you will see.”
“ It had been a long time. I was just as old as you, and life was in a completely different way. There were no chimneys, no factories, no schools, not even the steam trains. And there were no ships. It was pretty fortunate at that time that ladies didn’ t need to do textile work, but we still needed to go into the forest to pick up food, mushrooms, and firewood for the daily life and to prepare the upcoming winter in particular. It was nearly Winter, the end of Autumn. We together crossed the lake Vattern to just take a view of the Frosten Flower. It was believed that these would only exist for a short period of time for each Great Winter which is once every 4 years. They were extremely rare to see because most of the time the forest was buried under the deep snow during the Great Winter until the First Spring came. And it was only possible to have a glance at them just at the edge of the Last Autumn and the Great Winter. We together stole a wooden raft, crossing the lake heading towards the forest. We were lucky enough to grant the chance of seeing these beautiful, gorgeous icey flowers reflecting the purple lights. It was like paradise, a place which was only filled with peace, silence and the beauty of the nature. ”