这只是我的一篇英语作文，如果有大佬给些建议什么的，非常感谢，特别是词汇谢谢(9)

Just within a few months, Grandma passed away. I don’ t know why my parents forbid me to go to the funeral, and I don’ t know what caused the death of my Grandma. She will be remembered, and these two names will be remembered as well, but I will always wonder, is it more accurate to remember these two, instead of these three.
我不相信有人会看到这里嘤嘤嘤， 不过如果有任何建议，提议什么的请跟我说说，毕竟我词汇真的不算很多。。。 语法也是，总之谢谢!!!