这只是我的一篇英语作文，如果有大佬给些建议什么的，非常感谢，特别是词汇谢谢(8)

She held my hands tightly, her eyes staring at me straightly, intently. “ You know, my little dear Queansta. Everything costs something. Every joyful moment costs something depressed in return. Everyday, every night, Moltzia’ s moan, the Poor Corgans’ begs are upon my ears, telling me to get back, to save it, to save her, to save all of the victims suffered before. Remember, Quensta. This is a curse for anyone who ever witnessed the Poor Corgan. Do me a favor. Please, remember these two names, remember there was and is a creature called the Poor Corgan, and there was a poor girl called Motzia.” She smiled, but with tears, whispering: “ So, this can also be counted as a relief, isn’ t it? ”