Red Velvet策划分析素材——本人翻译的公开顺序和Chapter顺序的《ReVe童话故事》(5)
燃烧着的"Red"太阳进入地平线后面，月亮紧随其后。孤独的ReVe凝视着寂静的夜空。她闭上眼睛，倾听轰鸣的焰火声和温暖的笑声。ReVe睁开一只眼睛去看旋转木马在转呀转。她睁开双眼去看因耀眼的焰火而迸发的天空。在闪耀的天空下面，一双手伸到向了ReVe。她抓住了这手，准备去引领一个永无落幕的狂欢节。
Chapter 2 In & Out
ReVe treads down the endless hole when she suddenly hears someone approaching.Swish!The sweetly scented wind tickles ReVe’s nose.ReVe stretches her hand and tries to seize the elusive wind.Her head whirls,intoxicated by the scent.But ReVe keeps on reaching. Finally,the wind approaches and whispers in ReVe’s ear:”Come,I’ll take you to a new world!”
当ReVe突然听到有什么在逼近的时候，她谨慎小心翼翼的探索这个无底洞。唰（嗖嗖声）！带着香甜气味的风戏弄着ReVe的鼻子。ReVe伸出她的手，试图抓住这难以捉摸的风。她旋转着头，被香气迷醉了。但ReVe仍然努力去触及或抓住（够着）。最后，这风逼近ReVe，在她的耳边低语：“来吧，我要带你去一个新的世界！”
Chapter 16 La Rouge
One,two,three.Bright red light sweeps over and exuberate music flows out.ReVe grows giddy,as light foot steps and whispers approach her.One,two,three.Red shoes pause in front of ReVe and whisper the words again,before breaking into an endless dance.”Ha ha ha ha ha…”
“一、二、三”明亮的红色灯光扫过，令人沉醉的音乐流出。ReVe变得晕眩，随着灯光的脚步声，低语着靠近她。“一、二、三”红鞋在ReVe面前止步，在突入无尽的舞蹈前，再次低语着那些词。“哈哈哈哈哈……”
Chapter 1 Psycho
Today the sun and the moon stop their game of hide and seek and approach each other.With each step they take,the sky darkens and the world murmurs.But the sun and the moon hold on to each other as if it were the end of the world.Bam!At that moment,a white hole opens up in the pitch black sky. Entranced by the sun and the moon’s giggles trickling out of the hole,ReVe embarks on a new adventure.
Chapter 2 In & Out
ReVe treads down the endless hole when she suddenly hears someone approaching.Swish!The sweetly scented wind tickles ReVe’s nose.ReVe stretches her hand and tries to seize the elusive wind.Her head whirls,intoxicated by the scent.But ReVe keeps on reaching. Finally,the wind approaches and whispers in ReVe’s ear:”Come,I’ll take you to a new world!”
当ReVe突然听到有什么在逼近的时候，她谨慎小心翼翼的探索这个无底洞。唰（嗖嗖声）！带着香甜气味的风戏弄着ReVe的鼻子。ReVe伸出她的手，试图抓住这难以捉摸的风。她旋转着头，被香气迷醉了。但ReVe仍然努力去触及或抓住（够着）。最后，这风逼近ReVe，在她的耳边低语：“来吧，我要带你去一个新的世界！”
Chapter 16 La Rouge
One,two,three.Bright red light sweeps over and exuberate music flows out.ReVe grows giddy,as light foot steps and whispers approach her.One,two,three.Red shoes pause in front of ReVe and whisper the words again,before breaking into an endless dance.”Ha ha ha ha ha…”
“一、二、三”明亮的红色灯光扫过，令人沉醉的音乐流出。ReVe变得晕眩，随着灯光的脚步声，低语着靠近她。“一、二、三”红鞋在ReVe面前止步，在突入无尽的舞蹈前，再次低语着那些词。“哈哈哈哈哈……”
Chapter 1 Psycho
Today the sun and the moon stop their game of hide and seek and approach each other.With each step they take,the sky darkens and the world murmurs.But the sun and the moon hold on to each other as if it were the end of the world.Bam!At that moment,a white hole opens up in the pitch black sky. Entranced by the sun and the moon’s giggles trickling out of the hole,ReVe embarks on a new adventure.
顶级翻译官Alpha和她的精英女王