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【MLP】小马美文原著摘享:无畏与面具大盗#2(3)

surges of adrenaline brought on by the promise of a new adventure had propelled her for the last several hours.——这句话写得挺好:写无畏势必踏上冒险新征程后高涨的情绪推着她完成了这几个小时的山间跋涉,在看到无畏归来后没有头绪到终于有了明确的线索,我们读者读后又何尝没有萌生这样的激情呢?(句子成分分析)surges of adrenaline——肾上腺素的激涌,主语。brought on——带起,定语。by the promise of… ——在…的承诺下,定语从句中的状语,修饰brought。had propelled——已经推动、驱动,谓语。

【MLP】小马美文原著摘享:无畏与面具大盗#2


Now she had Daring Do’s attention. Maybe there was a connection between the guest and her own visitor. Daring leaned in closer and brought her voice to a low rasp. "Was he wearing a green cloak, perchance? Messy golden mane?"
(旅店除三号房有过人外,其他都是闲置的)这引起了无畏的关注,也许这个客人与她的访客有什么关联。无畏凑近了些,压低声音,带着些沙哑地问道:“他是不是披件绿兜帽——可能,还有身脏兮兮的金黄鬃毛?”(似乎无畏说话不怎么小心)

【MLP】小马美文原著摘享:无畏与面具大盗#2


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