鹿的自白2

I woke up from the whine because I heard the gunshot.
我从哀鸣中清醒，因为我听见了枪声。
I saw the deer on the other side of the river fall.
我看见河对岸的那只鹿倒下了。
I hurriedly reminded the deer around me to look across the river,but no deer paid any attention to me.
我慌忙的提醒周围的鹿群看看河对岸，但是没有鹿理我。
I watched from a distance as the deer died,died alone,an expell deer died.