诡秘外国网友评论节选意译 - 【482-483】(3)

Second volume’s plots seems very shattered but it still attractive, the main problem was the main plots was very compacted, incident after incident, Klein never got time to breath, he was always busy to solve problems, and lack of time to relax. It probably make some readers unable to relax and anxiety. Timeline was separated by Tarot meeting each week, so every week there must be beyonder events to keep the story entertaining, author tried to jump some less important meetings and make the timeline under control. 

Of course Tarot meeting is an important element as well, author won’t forget the first meeting when Emlyn attend. Author also happy with the characters he built, because readers like them. Using 0-17 to close the fight to show that church is still powerful otherwise they won’t rule for long. Other than that there are more stories about it in the future. 
At last after years of writing author is aiming to use simple, easy words to tell the stories, no needs to exaggerate and long description about something, leave spaces to readers, when at the right moment even the simple words can penetrate readers hearts and shock them. Even he is still not master the skill, he thinks he is on the correct track. And please anticipate volume three Traveller and it will be more fun and excitement.