诡秘外国网友评论节选意译 - 【331-342】(5)
2023-08-19 来源:百合文库
哈哈哈，奥黛丽发现佛尔思用比她拿到的进价高70多镑的价格卖出配方了=D
Monrai
It's already a 300s chapter and I'm not even remotely bored, what a great story and author!
已经300章了我还一点都没厌倦。这作者和这故事实在是太厉害了！
（回复楼上） Zelsa
Agreed. Each chapter is meaningful, very little pacing issues. Very little wasted or unnecessary jargon. In-depth characters with complexity, instead of generic, tropish archetypes. Story, plot, and narrative is smooth, consistent and has proper foresight. This novel is a great example of what a webnovel should be, whether they are Chinese, Japanese, or Korean webnovels. The writing shows the great amount of effort and time that was placed into it. I wish this site promoted more stories with this standard and level of writing.
同意。每一章都很有意义，很少出现节奏上的问题。几乎没有毫无意义的对话。角色形象都很复杂而有深度，不像是那些常见的套路化的、脸谱化的人物。故事，情节，还有叙事都非常流畅，保持了一致性，同时还适当地前后呼应。这本小说为网文应该如何写提供了精彩的范例，不管是中国网文，日本轻小说，还是韩国小说都一样。这本书的行文展示了作者花费在本书上的大量精力和时间。我希望这个网站能推出更多拥有这种级别的写作水平的故事。
【333章（无面人-120章 跟踪者】
Vessel_Scholar
Beyonders really like their themed gatherings
非凡者们是真的很喜欢搞主题聚会party哦
（回复楼上） Surely_Panda
Guess you got to dress it up a little. You know like "my gathering is more mysterious then the other guy's so bring your gold pounds over."
Monrai
It's already a 300s chapter and I'm not even remotely bored, what a great story and author!
已经300章了我还一点都没厌倦。这作者和这故事实在是太厉害了！
（回复楼上） Zelsa
Agreed. Each chapter is meaningful, very little pacing issues. Very little wasted or unnecessary jargon. In-depth characters with complexity, instead of generic, tropish archetypes. Story, plot, and narrative is smooth, consistent and has proper foresight. This novel is a great example of what a webnovel should be, whether they are Chinese, Japanese, or Korean webnovels. The writing shows the great amount of effort and time that was placed into it. I wish this site promoted more stories with this standard and level of writing.
同意。每一章都很有意义，很少出现节奏上的问题。几乎没有毫无意义的对话。角色形象都很复杂而有深度，不像是那些常见的套路化的、脸谱化的人物。故事，情节，还有叙事都非常流畅，保持了一致性，同时还适当地前后呼应。这本小说为网文应该如何写提供了精彩的范例，不管是中国网文，日本轻小说，还是韩国小说都一样。这本书的行文展示了作者花费在本书上的大量精力和时间。我希望这个网站能推出更多拥有这种级别的写作水平的故事。
【333章（无面人-120章 跟踪者】
Vessel_Scholar
Beyonders really like their themed gatherings
非凡者们是真的很喜欢搞主题聚会party哦
（回复楼上） Surely_Panda
Guess you got to dress it up a little. You know like "my gathering is more mysterious then the other guy's so bring your gold pounds over."
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